Monday, August 19, 2013

Passing through




Amid the multitude of people all aligned, waiting;
Most not even present, vaguely anxious,
Inside the empty looks, the shadows
I find myself, inadvertently contemplating, absorbing the moment.

As a sordid sound of machinery announces its arrival,
The hundreds of people start their march
Each assigned to a random point, that indicate the gateway;
And as the march proceeds, I stand on my ground, immobile

I see their aim, their goal to enter their assigned space,
Inside, others move, exit, migrate, its all alive;
but nobody notices, they all simply exist
While I see the sudden acquaintances of created by the moment.

As I stand, a new sound of pleasant melody announces its time;
I stand where I started, gazing at the faces, their indifference.
And as the subway wagon resumes its journey, more rapidly each moment,
I contemplate the faces that vanish, passing through, melting, fading away.

2 comments:

Tijana said...

Nice! I love the concept of being on the subway for this theme. Nice contrast also between the motion and oblivion on the one hand (the mass) and the immobility and contemplation on the other hand (the speaker). Well-done! Here's something for you to consider, as a completely different style of writing poetry which touches on similar issues: it's Ezra Pound's famous short Imagist poem, which goes like this
"In the Station of the Metro"
The apparition of these faces in the crowd/ Petals on a wet, black bough."

Tijana said...

You might also want to read Philip Larkin's "Whitsun Weddings" (quite a bit longer than the Pound piece, and not an example of Imagism): one of the best examples of the speaker noticing something about the people (just-married couples) on the train, all of whom are just passing through the lives of each other.